Hello everyone, today I would like to introduce to you about Tet holiday in Vietnam. Before Tet, people clean their houses, c

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Hello everyone, today I would like to introduce to you about Tet holiday in Vietnam. Before Tet, people clean their houses, clean everything, their children and grandchildren gather to pack banh chung and tet cakes, people eagerly go to buy flowers such as peach blossoms, apricot flowers… On New Year’s Day, children receive lucky money and receive good wishes. Everyone ate together warmly and happily. After Tet, everyone cleans up and sends gifts to those who have to work far away, wishing everyone a happy Tet.
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&Yacute; kiến ri&ecirc;ng ạ:      -  Bạn c&oacute; thể thay đổi từ clean their houses ở d&ograve;ng thứ 3-4 th&agrave;nh decorate the houses để l&agrave;m c&acirc;u hay hơn.    -   C&acirc;u Everyone ate together warmly and happily th&igrave; đ&acirc;y k phải l&agrave; QKĐ n&ecirc;n bạn đổi ate th&agrave;nh eat nh&eacute;. Chỗ đ&oacute; bạn c&oacute; thể thay đổi l&agrave;: The people gathering to eat and play together. ( Mọi người sum vầy để ăn v&agrave; chơi đ&ugrave;a c&ugrave;ng nhau)    =>   B&agrave;i văn đầy đủ &yacute;, hơi sai ngữ ph&aacute;p ch&uacute;t, n&ecirc;n thay đổi 1 số từ để b&agrave;i văn tr&ocirc;ng &yacute; nghĩa hơn  .   CH&Uacute;C BẠN HỌC TỐT NEK.

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