Đề : What do you do last summer? Yêu cầu: bổ sung thêm bớt để cho bài văn hay hơn với nhiều hơn ạ. Last summer vacation I a

Đề : What do you do last summer?
Yêu cầu: bổ sung thêm bớt để cho bài văn hay hơn với nhiều hơn ạ.
Last summer vacation I and my family made a trip to visit Da Lat city for a week by car. Dalat city is very beatiful. I and my family a lot of places such as Da Lat market, the love valley, Truc Lam pagoda, big flowers, Doi Thong Hai Mo and so on. Beside that, we rented a small boat to visit Xuan Huong lake. Morover, we ate some good food such as Banh Xeo, Be Thui, Bun Mam and so on. In addition, we bought some souvenirs and presents for friends. I love DaLat very much I hope that I”ll visit it again in the next summer.

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    Last summer vacation, me and my family had a one week trip to visit Da Lat city by car. Dalat city is very beautiful. My family and I went to many places such as Dalat market, love valley, Truc Lam pagoda, great thousand flowers, Hai Mo pine hill… Besides, we rented a small boat to visit Xuan Huong lake. . Morover, we ate some delicious food like Banh Xeo, Veal, Bun Mam,… After going out and eating, we rented a 5-star hotel, served enthusiastically and thoughtfully. The room is cool, clean, can see the fog gathering on the top of the mountain. In addition, we bought some souvenirs for friends and relatives. After 1 week in Dalat, I feel more comfortable and enjoyable. I love Dalat so much, I hope that I will visit it again next summer.
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  2. Last summer vacation my family made a trip to visit Da Lat city for a week by car. Dalat is not only very beautiful but also has good weather. We went to a lot of places such as Da Lat market, the love valley, Truc Lam pagoda, big flowers, Doi Thong Hai Mo,… and so on. Besides that, we rented a small boat to visit Xuan Huong lake. Xuan Huong lake is nice, too. It is surrounded by flower gardens, pine forests, parks… In addition, we ate some good food such as Banh Xeo, Be Thui, Bun Mam …They are delicious. Moreover, we bought some souvenirs and presents for friends. In summary, the trip to Dalat is an unforgettable experience. I hope that I’ll have many opportunities to come here. 
    Ý kiến của riêng mk chỉnh thành như này ạ! Mình hay viết văn luận nên cx ko rành mấy này lắm :(( Mong giúp đc cho bạn :3 
    Chúc bạn học tốt <3! Good luck! Cho mk ctrlhn đc khum ạ

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