Mn ơi, e mới viết 1 đoạn văn, vì đang còn yếu phần writing nên viết sẽ có chỗ sai ngữ pháp. Mn đọc và sửa giúp e với ạ. E cảm ơn mn nhiều!
I’m really worried and don’t know what to do now. Hoa – my best friend, she had to drop out of school and started working. Because her parents can’t support her. She is working in a sewing company. Besides, she has to do many other jobs such as helping desks, washing dishes…Our teacher and the school leaders tried to convince her family to let her go back to school. Because of difficult economic situation, her family gave up.
I miss Hoa very so much. The days without her going to school with me, i really feel sad and emtry. I and all my classmates want her to go to school. She is a excellent student. In my class, everyone loves her. I hope someone can help her family to continute her education.
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