Viết thêm một số đoạn cho bài kể về chuyến đi sở thú sau cho thêm sinh động hơn ( lưu ý: có thể đảo các câu lên cho hợp lí )

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1. Hello everyone. Last summer, i and my family went to the zoo. It was a very fun and meaningful trip. From my house to the zoo it took about 30 minutes. In the morning after breakfast was around 8 o’clock. After arriving, we entered the zoo gate, we quickly headed towards the cage. The first cage is the monkey’s cage, we look very smart. Next, we saw elephants. Very funny and cute elephants. When I was there, They picked bananas. After seeing elephants, we saw birds, the birds sang very beautifully. Then, my family saw peacocks, they moved beautifully. My visit to the zoo had in increased my knowledge of animals. Ended the trip we had eaten at a restaurant together.

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2. Hi guys. Last year, because I was a good student, my parents gave me a trip to the zoo. That night I could not sleep. It was a very fun and meaningful trip. From my house to the zoo is 20km to there about 30 minutes. The next morning after breakfast is about 8 o’clock. After arriving, we entered the zoo gate, we quickly headed towards the cage. The first cage is a monkey cage, we look very smart. Next, we see the elephants. The elephants are very funny and cute. When I was there, they picked bananas. After watching elephants, we saw birds, birds singing very well. Then my family saw the peacocks, they moved beautifully. My visit to the zoo increased my knowledge about the animals. At the end of the trip we ate together at a restaurant. I will never forget this fun-filled outing.

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